ACTIVITY 9.9
Second Draft Critiques

Now that you have had a chance to revise your draft, and if time permits, arrange another round of peer reviews.

Step 1: Reflecting on Your Revisions

First, write a new reflective statement about the most recent draft by considering the following. Be sure to append your reflective statement to the draft before sharing it with your peers.

What did you change to create this most recent draft, and why did you do so?

What is your favorite part of this draft?

What other revisions are you planning on making?

Are there particular sections you want particular type of help on?

Are there some particular issues you want your readers to focus on?

If you had had more time to prepare this draft, what would you have done differently?

Step 2: Sharing Second Drafts

Exchange your draft with the same or new peer critics either in hard copy or electronic file or as E-mail or an E-mail attachment. Peer critics should use the criteria described in Activity 9.6 to generate feedback on this most recent draft.